Tuesday 3 February 2015

Day 3: Soul Survivor

Day 3 involved quite an interesting challenge. While previous days asked us to be inspired by existing ideas and the real world today we were asked to create an entire world with it's own culture, concepts and rules. Doing this in one day and then communicating those rules through a short plat is not easy and I have no idea if I've gotten close. It's a great exercise though as world building is a useful skill. I'm not going to say much more as part of the task is communicating the world through the piece so I'll just leave off here.

                                                            Soul Survivor
                                                            By Jeremy Linnell

Four people huddle round a small mechanical device in a field, near a small medieval style village.
Felix: I’ve got an hour. How long do you guys have?
Julia: 40 minutes, give or take.
Felix: Try and be exact. Trust yourself.
Julia: Ugh, fine. 40 minutes.
Ashly: 53 minutes.
Julia: Bullshit you can be that exact.
Ashly: You will, when you’re older. You get used to the rhythm. The feeling.
Bob: …..Five minutes…..
Felix: Shit. You better start heading home.
Bob: Yeah. Can’t be near you guys when it comes back.
Julia: Won’t they just pull it out of your memory?
Ashly: Not as far as we know.
Bob: Which admittedly is mostly guesswork.
Ashly: Observed conclusions logically made. How do you think you get to the top?
Bob: I dunno. It’s random innit.
Ashly: You cooperate. You give them full access. And the only reason they’d reward that is because that’s something they can’t just take.
Julia: Shit. That’s smart.
Ashly: It’s why I got no problem killing the higher ups. They’re letting ‘em in.
Felix: Yeah but if you resist too much…<makes wrist slashing motion>
Ashly: There’s a difference between compliance and resistance.
Bob: While I’m sure this is going to be a fascinating moral debate unless we want it to wake up in front of our only hope I’ve gotta go.
Julia: See ya Bob.
Bob: Tara Jules.
Felix: Don’t forget the signal.
Bob: I won’t. Do you think it’ll be long before we all synch up again?
Felix: As long as they don’t cotton on there’s no reason we shouldn’t.
Bob: True. See ya later.
Bob leaves
Ashly: we should let him stay. It’d be worthwhile watching the process close up.
Julia: Why can’t we?
Felix: Because we don’t know how they communicate, but they seem to share knowledge. They’d all know within moments of it coming back. So we’d have to kill him
Ashly: So? We’ve been stuck with them 500 years because people are too cowardly to make sacrifices.
Julia: It’s not that bad is it? They mostly take a back seat. We get plenty of time to ourselves.
Ashly: Look, you’re young. But think about it. How much better things would be without them.
Felix: Ashly’s right. We get a few hours to ourselves each day.
Julia: So? They don’t….hurt.
Felix: No but…we can’t focus ourselves. Nothing gets finished that doesn’t benefit them.
Julia: Is that why down here’s so…rubbish?
Ashly: Yeah. The ones who cooperate get to live in those floating cites. We could have them, if they let us work. God only knows what other stuff they have up there.
Julia: I heard the people who live up there can make things just by thinking about them. It’s like all your dreams in one.
Ashly: More like nightmares. Nothing good comes from working with them.
Felix: There has been no advancement down here for….god we don’t even know! They don’t give a shit about time keeping.
Ashly: Until they came people were…well we think they were essentially gods. They could create anything they wanted. Whole worlds from just words. Life. Flight. We ruled.
Felix: Which is why we need to get rid of them. And why it’s taken so long to get to where we are now.
Ashly: And why anyone who helps them has to die.
Felix: You must have had a few times when you were in the middle of doing something, something that you thought was beautiful and vital. And then the pit of your stomach drops, you feel it welling up inside.
Julia: Don’t…I don’t like to think about it.
Felix: The icy-coldness in your brain, the world becoming far and distant. Like looking through a telescope the wrong way. And then poof. Interest lost. Off you, milling about, just existing so that thing inside you has somewhere warm to come home to.
Ashly: Everything that makes you human gone, a spectator in your own life. Until it decides to leave again.
Julia: I didn’t really think….
Felix: Nobody really does. They make it seem like it’s normal. Not that bad. But then people remember.
Ashly: Only when they’re not here. And we can’t stop them coming back. Day after day.
Julia: So why even give us that time. To torture us?
Felix: We’re not sure. Maybe they feed off something in us that only build up when they’re not there.
Ashly: Or maybe they have to leave. Or they are just sadistic bastards.
Julia: Maybe Ashly is right. Maybe we should watch one up close.
Felix: People have tried that before. My father for one.
Julia: And?
Felix: We know they need us. We know they’re either parasitic or symbiotic. Full autopsies show no trace. Nothing in the blood, the organs or the brain.
Ashly: Which is where this thing comes in <she boots the machine>
Julia: What’s that?
Felix: His life’s work. 30 years of building, still not finished. The amount of mental control he had to show to hide it, day in, day out….he died to make sure they never knew about it.
Ashly: Be a shame if he was wrong then.
Felix: He’s not. With all the evidence he can’t be. They affect our minds, our creative impulses.
Ashly: Hence we still live like shit.
Felix: There’s no trace of them physically, but we know they’re there, we see their effects. So my father reckoned they must be parasites of the soul.
Julia: The soul?
Felix: Yeah. And this machine is going to let us see them.
Julia: And then what?
Ashly: Once we know where they are, what they are, we can attack.
 The End

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