Wednesday 18 February 2015

Day 17: No Strings (2nd Edition)

We've all done it right? Written something, or worked for hours on something (even if that something is a game) and suddenly the power goes, something crashes and we realise it's been hours since we last saved. Today's task was based around that terrifying modern event. We had to imagine that something we wrote was lost in the ether and rewrite it. I chose one of my plays from earlier in the competition, I wrote it in *ahem* a bit of a haze and all I could remember was it was called No Strings and involved shadow puppets. So here's my do-over!

                                                                    No Strings
                                                                By Jeremy Linnell

Behind a screen, projected in shadow an old hooded man wheels on a cart, overflowing with objects, old masks, puppets, artifacts and wonders. He starts to erect a stand, displaying each piece with care and attention. The mask is of an ancient deity, its expression filled with rage and arrogance. There is a cup, ornate handles and taller than practicality allows.  A statue of a warrior, a tribute to his conquests. There is history and fable suggested in each object placed. We want to know about them all. He places one of the puppets on the floor where it grows in size. As the man speaks the scene around the puppets will morph to match his words. He is master of reality.
Old Man:  A long time ago, in a land much like this one there lived a man. He was a good man and worked hard and humbly.
The puppet begins to move, a field springing up around his feet as he kneels to work.
The work was hard and the days were long but he did not complain. His place was set for him and he took to it graciously. For many years he woke, worked, ate and slept alone. Then one day something wonderful happened. He fell in love.
The old man takes a second puppet from the table and places it upon the floor. It grows in size. The first puppet notices it and ecstatically embraces its new companion.
From that day forward the man and his companion knew true happiness. The days were still long and the work was still hard but together they made them seem bright and joyful.
The puppets work under the gaze of a bright and cheerful sun.
However one day that would change. Someone much like myself came to him and offered him a way to work harder, in a shorter time. He could control the hours of the day and create more of them for himself.
The old man picks up the mask from the table and offers it to the first puppet. The puppet considers it for a moment and takes it, placing it upon itself. The terrible visage of the mask merges with its own.
For a time it worked.
The puppet sinks to the floor and starts to work, easily double the speed of its companion.
However the man had failed to tell him the mask had a dark and terrible history. It did not create more hours, it simple allowed its possessor to take them from later in his life and burn them now. It was only to be used for special occasions and emergencies. Although some of its owners did use it for pleasure. And yet…
The masked puppet continues to work in a frenzy, faster, faster, faster. His companion steps back in shock, retreating from him.
His behaviour under the masks constant influence grew bigger, more demanding, more frenzied. His constant companion no longer recognized the man they had fallen in love with.
The masked puppet is becoming emaciated. Worried the second puppet steps forward and attempts to embrace him. They are shaken off and the masked puppet returns to work.
As the days past this took a toll on him. He would sleep for days. Upon waking he would do a weeks’ worth of work in a few hours only to fall in to a fitful slumber once more.
The masked puppets movements become jerky, unnatural and erratic. The other cowers from her unrecognisable lover.
Unable to bear it any longer his lover asked him to remove the mask. And he did love them so, and so he tried. But he could not.
The masked puppet attempts to wrench the mask from his face. It is stuck firm.
So his companion tried to remove it for him, believing that their love would save him.
The second puppet tries to pull the mask off. But it will not come.
And in their attempt to save him the beast that was wearing him did become full of rage. It did not understand. It was helping him! He was working! It struck out at those he loved so that he would be left alone to continue his work.
The masked puppet strikes the second puppet.
And yet she would not leave. So the mask struck again.
The second puppet is hit again
The man knew what his mask was capable of now. But he would not give it up. It was part of him and he was part of it. So he too lashed out.
A third strike. The puppet falls down.
And that strike was the last. Finally free to work as he wished he did what needed to be done.
The second puppet is buried
And continued his work in peace. The weeks he slept become months. The days he worked became hours. And eventually.
The masked puppet collapses.
He woke no more.
The old man takes the mask off the puppet and puts it back with his things. The puppets shrink and they too are returned.
Can I interest you in some of my wares? Everything is for sale.  I think you’ll find me quite flexible on the price.
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